Riverside Brookfield Vs. Fenton Commercial

Riverside Brookfield

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial advertising the first basketball game covered by RBTV Sports in the 2015-2016 season.

Judge 1

Positives: - Editing - Graphics

Improvements: - Needs a storyline or idea, unless I am totally invested in either of the teams, this is just noise - The game footage is hard to connect with and understand, perhaps shooting some b-roll of the players, teams, coaches and/or fans would help the viewer connect with this.

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