It’s What I Was Born To Do

Riverside Brookfield

Documentary

Entry Description

A short biographical piece on local Riverside artist, Tariq Tamir.

Judge 1

Positives: Structuring his life story was well done. I like that he was filmed in his work environment.

Improvements: Broll shots could have been shot better with a tripod and in focus. Could have been a bit longer and detailed in his explaining his difficulties being an artist.

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