Sleepy Head

Hinsdale Central

Music Video

Entry Description

music video

Judge 1

Positives: The editing was very good. The cuts and stop animation sinked well with the music. I was impressed with the stop animation.

Improvements: The story could use more substance such as more development of the story. The intro didn't seem necessary and maybe that would be a good place to put something to develop the story.

Judge 2

Positives: High marks for combining animation with live-action, and giving each of them a unique look. The stuff in the woods has a great look to it and almost looked like a horror movie - super!

Improvements: Wasn't sure if the girl was having a nightmare about the woods, or if there was something else going on. Maybe you wanted that ambiguity, but I wanted to know more about the connection between the two locations.

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