Zomedy

Downers Grove North

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

How do you support a friend who has been bitten by a zombie?

Judge 1

Positives: - Fun story about friendship with standing even the zombie apocalypse, though I would have liked to have seen more zombie friends activities. - Good job poking fun at the cheesy 80's snap zooms for the "Bro" montages.

Improvements: - The ketchup joke worked, but took up time that may have been better used exploring more of the zombie / human friend dynamics. You have a unique idea that could be taken farther. I'd like to see more. - Get room tone even when you are outside. Just 30 seconds worth can applied underneath your audio tracks while editing and make the background humming and other natural sounds more consistent through the piece and can help with the audio pops at the start and close of talent dialogue.

Judge 2

Positives: * Interesting take on a "buddy film"/"bromance".

Improvements: * Improve your video quality. Not in HD. * Sound balance issues.

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