Audi Commercial

Waubonsie Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

Commercial for Audi automobile

Judge 1

Positives: - editing is strong - camera work is strong

Improvements: - not sure what the "idea" is; - the commercial does a good job of showing off the "sheet metal" but the story/plot/point of the commercial doesn't do enough to differentiate it from other car commercials

Judge 2

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Judge 3

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Judge 4

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