Vanessa DiBernardo Feature

Waubonsie Valley

News Package

Entry Description

Feature story on Waubonsie Valley alum and professional women's soccer player Vanessa DiBernardo.

Judge 1

Positives: - Good questions - The interview is framed nicely

Improvements: - While the interview is interesting, the package doesn't feel like you're telling me a story. Work to use less of the sit down interview and more of your own voice and story-telling abilities. - It would be interesting to hear from girl on the soccer team about having such a talented alum playing pro soccer.

Judge 2

Positives: B-rolled the interview very well, good use of the still photos and archival video, good cutaways from the game

Improvements: Not much of a PKG, more of an interview, I'm not a fan of the reporter cutaway or the on-camera interview questions, just feels too forced, the interview didn't feel very conversational

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