Animation Music Video

Oak Park River Forest

Animation

Entry Description

An animated music video

Judge 1

Positives: Good job making the mouth movements match the singer's voice and good use of camera angles to add more visual dynamics to the piece. Good work all around and use of the clock and dolls on the desk to add a dynamic to the character through visual storytelling.

Improvements: The animation could be improved upon by having some cut aways to the character acting out what she is singing about. For example, when she says "How long should I scream" you could cut away to a clip of her screaming to add more to the story telling. Additionally, the piece could have been improved by placing the character in an additional setting/background.

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