My mom is so strict

Wheaton-Warrenville South

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two gentlemen get into an argument over who's mom is more strict after they get invited to go to Bdubbs.

Judge 1

Positives: - Some of the jokes were clever. - Editing effects in the end looked well put together.

Improvements: - Story seemed to lack a narrative through line. What starts out as odd / funny things for moms to be angry about seemingly shifts into whoever can shout the worst thing. - Audio was too low in some places and too loud in others. Always use the audio mixer tool in any major editing software to judge your sound levels before exporting projects. Careful when shooting in high winds, its often very difficult to pull great sound in such an environment where good audio is key.

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