In the Victim's Voice

Franklin High School

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

The words from cyberbullies are not heard in the attacker's voice like typical bullying, rather, the words are heard in the victim's voice in their own head. The voice of ridicule becomes their own.

Judge 1

Positives: Great editing, with the multiple images on the screen, good use of green screen. Very believable character. Nice use of Facebook images intertwined with the scene.

Improvements: Language was a little harsh for a Public Service Announcement. Could have cut the music when the computer shut for more of a dramatic ending.

Judge 2

Positives: Your lighting and set up worked very well to tell the story. Your editing was innovative and really worked well.

Improvements: make sure your edits cut with the music and with the point you're trying to make like when she closed the laptop - the sound and the girls should disappear as soon as we hear the laptop close.

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