Society's Heirloom

Franklin High School

Commercial

Entry Description

An apple has been an iconic symbol in society that has represented success and innovation since the beginning of time. It's been passed down each generation, and each time, holds a specific significance.

Judge 1

Positives: - Simple, clear story-telling - Clever way to show the significance of the apple

Improvements: - While clever, not sure what you want me to do when I see this? Feel good about apples? - Some clarity around the bigger point you are trying to make. Maybe a clearer tagline or call to action. For example: "Society's Heirloom Apples, nourishing mind, body, soul for generations.

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