Punny World

Vernon Hills

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

The complete comedic narrative created by Carlos

Judge 1

Positives: The sheer disregard for any kind of plot and lack of consideration for what the audience might be interested in watching was fascinating. Nice location. Also, building tension with music is a skill that could be cultivated.

Improvements: Narrative structure was nonexistent. Consider writing a story next time or something that expresses a cohesive idea.

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