Road to Success - Sam Patt

Vernon Hills

Documentary

Entry Description

A documentary created for our school newspaper.

Judge 1

Positives: It was a simple film that was easy to follow. The editing was crisp. I got a good sense of the main subject of the film and his passion for music.

Improvements: I know it's about Sam, but I wish the film was also more about the band, their growth and struggles. That would've given me a more complete picture of the dream. I would also wish for a little more diversity of camera angles and movies. It was fairly static.

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