Newscene

Oak Park River Forest

News Program

Entry Description

Weekly News Program.

Judge 1

Positives: Great NATSOT in open of Japanese festival Nice camerawork - you had a lot of close-ups Also nice shots in carwash piece Nice composition of shot in interview of women's basketball Anchors - nice delivery

Improvements: ***Try to write :30-:50 of voiceover for the anchor to read over the b-roll footage instead of playing music under - then it would be more like a newscast For example, the anchor would read a lead in to the carwash footage then continue reading the copy while you see the b-roll of the event. (voice-over or VO) Anchor should dress professionally - not t-shirts Women's Basketball piece - use super for her name at start of interview - you don't need her to state her name Bears song under hockey footage?

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