Homecoming 2K15

Eisenhower

News Package

Entry Description

As Homecoming 2K15 kicked off, I did a fancam at the homecoming football game.

Judge 1

Positives: -narrator seems to know his subjects (which could've been used to tell a story) - editing was good

Improvements: -narrator spent too much time introducing himself and didn't tell a story. We just heard that people were excited. We don't know who won the homecoming game, and we know nothing about any of the people he spoke to. I think this is something you would do on a Facebook live feed. The fancam could elaborate on any element of the fans' participation or preparation... Even the outcome. I hope this is helpful. ( he also needs to speak more clearly)

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