Morks Flowers

Wauconda Community High School

Commercial

Entry Description

This commercial is for a flower shop that is in Wauconda

Judge 1

Positives: - The story line was clear - The acting helped tell the story

Improvements: - The story was more about flowers in general, nothing about the flower shop specifically - The story while understandable was predictable and expected, need to inject some surprise and freshness into the storyline

Judge 2

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Judge 3

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