Buff Joe's Promo

Highland Park

Commercial

Entry Description

This is a Buff Joe's Lunch promo aired in support of the 2016 Charity Drive for College Bound Opportunities at Highland Park High School.

Judge 1

Positives: - funny idea - story is well told

Improvements: - not exactly sure what the point of the story is even though it made me laugh - Need to connect the story/idea with the CBO somehow (not sure what to suggest here)

Judge 2

Positives: Great editing, strong match cuts. Sound was working well.

Improvements: Understanding time constraints, plot was difficult to follow. Was aching for a stronger resolution.

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