Public service announcement from special olympics students on stopping the use of the "R Word".
Positives: - Great use of camera movements and angles, the variety gave the PSA great energy. - Your story was clear and to the point.
Improvements: - I would work to better balance your sound. Your subjects were often competing against the music and you needed a bit more natsound under the athletics.
Positives: - You set an uplifting tone! - Excellent build up to your message of inclusion.
Improvements: - You don't need the music in the beginning. Hearing the actual sounds would be nice for the piece. - it is uplifting, but continue to work toward conveying more emotion.
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