Boys' Basketball vs. Boone Grove

Crown Point

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Entry Description

Johnny Supan reports on the Crown Point boy's basketball game as they host Boone Grove.

Judge 1

Positives: -You have a strong voice. - It's clear you have a solid mastery of basketball and how to cover a game.

Improvements: -Continue to work toward being more expressive in your standups. Pretend you're telling a friend about the game. - I would like to hear from a player on the losing team also. As a viewer, I want to know how they felt about losing. This would also provide balance. If you didn't want to use three sound bites, you could also paraphrase a comment from a player on the losing team in your standup tag.

Judge 2

Positives: Pretty straightforward game recap, hit the facts well, game footage looked good

Improvements: Stand-up felt rushed, coach interview was out of focus, probably should've used the word "historic" instead of "historical" game footage felt dry, would've liked more action, quicker cuts

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