9/11 Feature

Waubonsie Valley

News Package

Entry Description

News piece on how students are beginning to forget 9/11

Judge 1

Positives: This piece is nicely written. Excellent camera work on the opening and closing shots. Good execution of narration.

Improvements: We needed to hear from students. That kept me from awarding high points for the story. We also needed more nat sound from classrooms, and we needed to begin with original video from classrooms, not stock footage.

Judge 2

Positives: Thought this was a very strong story, liked the framing of the interviews

Improvements: The standups were a little out of focus, would have liked some nat sounds, while I liked the framing of the interviews, at times there were almost too much in profile and I didn't like the white wall behind the one teacher, although the American flag was a nice touch

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