I'm Not Dead

New Trier

Cinematography

Entry Description

A death faked so well that not even his own friends recognize him.

Judge 1

Positives: Good night scenes. Nice use of blue and warm light on the subject.

Improvements: Indoor scenes could have been more cinematic with lighting. Could of used better framing. Variety of shots would help. Wide, Medium and Tight.

Judge 2

Positives: Dark, ominous lighting worked well for this piece. The pan down the alleyway as the protagonist ran by made for a very interesting movement.

Improvements: While the tone of the piece was conveyed well through a lack of light, and the presence of shadow – I would have liked to see the outdoor scenes up-lit quite a bit to further understand the narrative, and be able to see what's taking place. The editing of the piece was a bit jarring.

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