Our hero, Jimmy Flash, takes down evil in this high octane action thriller!
Positives: - Good use of framing and visual space to tell your story. - There was a very clear beginning, middle, and end.
Improvements: - soundtrack does not relate to the story being told. What other sound choices could be utilized to tell your character's journey? - some of the action is a little difficult to follow - Remember that the audience does not know what you know about your characters and the action going on.
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