Synordie

Wheaton-Warrenville South

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

The school's grading system, Synergy, has gone awry, and is terrorizing kids throughout the school in...Synordie!

Judge 1

Positives: The title sequence looks very professional. I thought this was funny. I am not sure if this is what the director was going for. If it was, then I thought it was an hilarious spoof on what would be an otherwise terrible horror movie.

Improvements: Some shots could be trimmed to quicken the pace of the trailer. Like the first shot of the pan across the computer screen, you can start it at "good morning" and end it after "last morning." The same thing happens to characters at 30 seconds and 44 seconds. They are both funny, but the second one was better. The kid with the glasses? Oh, man. He's funny. Cut the one at 30 seconds. You need the time anyway, the trailer is a little long and the joke gets a little old.

Judge 2

Positives: Interesting concept and storyline. Nice job with graphics and music.

Improvements: Acting was a bit overdone. Some edits were so quick hard to understand visual.

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