When the Film Maker Stays at school too late, it comes to find them.
Positives: Really liked the shots and the lighting at :18 and :20 seconds. Sound design and camera movements were effective. Was actually intrigued by the character of "It". Wanted to know more about where it comes from. Effective use of editing and cinematography.
Improvements: There was a missing Premiere file at :46. Always double check your export. The story could have been better told, why were kids in New Trier working at the computer at night?
Positives: Good dramatic sense in your composition. Most shots and sequencing well composed.
Improvements: Doesn't show directing creativity. Too much of just one note.
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