Kevin has trouble with paying tuition for college and agrees to meet up with a gangster to get the money for it. How far will Kevin go to get what he wants?
Positives: Shots were well composed. Performance and story setup were coherent.
Improvements: Tone is not clear - scenes imply serious action but narration is lighthearted - is this a comedy? Not a lot of variety in camera work - all angles are tripod setups (no movement) - this could add intensity and interest.
Positives: Lighting and camera well done. Interesting use of narrator.
Improvements: Trailer ended without a concluding scene. Seemed "cut off" by mistake. Some audio varied too much from scene to scene.
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