Keep Your Eye on Me

Franklin High School

Animation

Entry Description

Jack doesn't let a little mishap get him down with a little help from his friend. Claymation.

Judge 1

Positives: - Very good emotional journey of the protagonist. Very clear beginning, middle, and end. - The score from the beginning to the character looking at itself in the mirror was very well done

Improvements: - The ending soundtrack was a little disjointed from the rest of the score. - The human hand helping the protagonist seemed out of place. The character's journey could have been more powerful if it had found a way to fix itself.

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