Imagine Your World

Franklin High School

Commercial

Entry Description

Crayola markers allows a student to immerse himself in his imagination.

Judge 1

Positives: - neat idea - tone and attitude work well

Improvements: - expand more on the "your imagination comes alive" idea - get to the idea of kid entering the world of his imagination sooner - with everybody's short attention span, I might not watch this long enough to see your idea; I would probably "skip" this ad before it got into the fun part

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