Right My Wrongs

Eisenhower

Music Video

Entry Description

Guy misses his ex-girlfriend and realizes that he messed up. Blinded by that fact, he messes things up with his current girlfriend.

Judge 1

Positives: I really liked the motion graphics at the end, it looked very professional. The audio was clear and went well with the story.

Improvements: I would vary up the shots more. Example: have some super tight shots and things that are happening. In the editing I would make the cuts happen more with the beat of the music, you need to make the video feel like it is being directed by the music.

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