Every morning is an opportunity to direct the course for your day. How will you change your morning, and in turn, change your day? The viewer is challenged to be a light and make an impact not just on themselves, but those around them.
Positives: - Sound was well balanced - Story was clear and told well with visuals and graphics! nice work
Improvements: - Your camera skills need a little sharpening, some shots were out of focus and always use a tripod! - Lighting was a little dark then a little too bright, try to keep it consistant
Positives: - Great job enterprising! You came up with a unique idea for a PSA. - Your voice over track is excellent.
Improvements: - You could narrow your focus more. You touch on several elements. - Tighten it up a bit. It's somewhat wordy.
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