Kayla's Krew

Franklin High School

News Package

Entry Description

Kayla is honored in our community through the many volunteers who created an all abilities accessible park in her memory. This news package highlights Kayla's Krew playground final build days and it impact on our community.

Judge 1

Positives: This piece was nicely written and helped to tell the story in a way that captured a viewers attention. Each interview advanced the story. They were conducted quite well.

Improvements: I would start with construction and incorporate sound better throughout the piece to advance the story. When you introduce Kayla we need more pictures of her and need to know a bit more of her story and how her mother was involved in the process.

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