Midnight

Eisenhower

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

a dramatic narrative following a high school couple as they do a senior prank they have planning since freshmen year. The story shows an insight on their relationship with a dramatic twist at the end.

Judge 1

Positives: 1. The music and score choices seemed to fit well into the story that was being told. 2. The ending message was pretty powerful and the transition with effects helped bring that moment to life.

Improvements: 1. The music was louder than the dialogue at times and overpowered it a little. 2. The story took a bit too long to get into what was really happening. Perhaps consider cutting out a little towards the beginning and using that extra time to expand on the later half of the story. Good idea, just needs fine tuning.

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