Wags 2 Wishes

Neuqua Valley

News Package

Entry Description

Wags 2 Wishes is an animal shelter in Naperville that is dedicated to helping dogs from around the country. Shae and Emma find out how the community can help this shelter, as well as animals in need.

Judge 1

Positives: The introduction of your interview subject and the communication of her message was clear. The story was concisely written. Good inclusion of websites and locations that leads viewers to other sources of additional information.

Improvements: There are clearly some excellent shots of dogs and dogs interacting with people. These should be at the top of the package, not signs. We see two signs and an interview before we see one picture of a dog. The animals help tell the story, include them. Who is bubba? We see a sign on a cage door, tell the story of who that dog is. And include the sounds the dogs make, barking, etc. This would have made the story much more interesting.

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