Someone You Should Know

Crown Point

Documentary

Entry Description

A Someone You Should Know piece on CPHS Senior, and sponsored skateboarder Salih Muhammad.

Judge 1

Positives: I like the placement of the backstory. Structure was great but felt like there was no ending.

Improvements: Music does not fit the story... I would have used some tracks he mentioned. Altiile much camera movement in the last interview bite.

Judge 2

Positives: Loved the way the film started, with the tricks edited together. Very arresting. Liked the subject and how you filmed him. He's a very engaging guy and you captured him well.

Improvements: I wish it had gone on longer! He said it's a big family, but I wish I'd gotten a sense of that family. And perhaps some music could've helped, at least well-placed.

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