Smoking is an ongoing problem for teens and young adults to this day. Its important know the longer you smoke the worse of a blow your body takes.
Positives: - The ominous lighting in this PSA really helped your message resonate with the audience. - Your graphics were clean and crisp, they matched your editing perfectly, really enjoyed how it looked.
Improvements: - Sound wasn't balanced throughout, it seems some of it might have been natsound. - This is being very picky but I felt you could've done more with your camera movement, there wasn't a diverse range.
Positives: -Very well done. The simple use of statistics is powerful. -I love the half light on your face and the smoke effect. Also powerful.
Improvements: - Your voice is good, but continue to work toward an even stronger and deliberate delivery.
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