Anti Smoking

Neuqua Valley
Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Smoking is an ongoing problem for teens and young adults to this day. Its important know the longer you smoke the worse of a blow your body takes.

Judge 1

Positives: - The ominous lighting in this PSA really helped your message resonate with the audience. - Your graphics were clean and crisp, they matched your editing perfectly, really enjoyed how it looked.

Improvements: - Sound wasn't balanced throughout, it seems some of it might have been natsound. - This is being very picky but I felt you could've done more with your camera movement, there wasn't a diverse range.

Judge 2

Positives: -Very well done. The simple use of statistics is powerful. -I love the half light on your face and the smoke effect. Also powerful.

Improvements: - Your voice is good, but continue to work toward an even stronger and deliberate delivery.

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