Snowball Commercial

Downers Grove North

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial for the upcoming Snowball.

Judge 1

Positives: Really creative fun storytelling. great job planning and executing. Nice job integrating graphics!

Improvements: what snowball is could have been a little clearer and adding a clear message on how to sign up! but you did a great job of saying when! The audio was a little low which made it a little tough to hear. boosting it will help amplify your message.

Judge 2

Positives: I liked the campy energy and authenticity of this piece - the visual tricks added some nice playfulness. It feels appropriate for it's audience. Spot is well paced.

Improvements: I wasn't entirely clear on what Snowball is - but I presume the student body audience this is intended for knows. Might be a little repetitive on the explosion visual, and the music bed sounds a bit outdated.

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