LTTV News

Lyons Township
News Program

Entry Description

This is an excerpt from LTTV News.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice zoom at the start of the newscast gives the illusion of a professional anchor desk. Nice job of video matching copy in the first piece. Good sound up from the principal.

Improvements: It would be nice to see a close up of the coach before she did her back flips. There should be nat sot under the broll and less repetition of some shots like the crowd shot, for example. By the time we get to the special olympics, it feels like we have seen enough crowd shots…. This feels like a huge block of sports leading the newscast if this is supposed to be a general newscast.

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