Kama Indian Bistro

Lyons Township

Commercial

Entry Description

This is a commercial for Kama Indian Bistro.

Judge 1

Positives: Good job with the variety interviews that help tell the story.

Improvements: Hard to hear. especially the music. The editing pace was also just a tad off. work on your timing with that! I liked where you were going with the story but the end dropped off. a nice solid bite about where the restaurant was (shameless plug) would have been great.

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