Headphones

New Trier

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A young man has to exercise his brain before he can exercise his other muscles.

Judge 1

Positives: This is a clever idea and something we can all relate to. The casting was good--seemed like an everyman. And the camerawork was simple but effective.

Improvements: I missed seeing whether he finally got the headphones untangled or not. I think that last bit is key to the story. Also, might have missed an opportunity to show reaction shots of some of the other people in the gym.

Judge 2

Positives: Continuity worked well.

Improvements: I feel like this could have been a comedy bit. not so much drama. the editing felt like you could have tightened it up more.

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