Agent 605

York

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

An original comedic narrative about an accidental top notch special agent who isn't necessarily the most enthusiastic.

Judge 1

Positives: Great dead-pan delivery. Great noir lighting in the intro.

Improvements: Work on structuring a cohesive narrative. Work on giving characters clear goals.

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