Hollywood Talent Show

Franklin High School

News Package

Entry Description

Every year the video production students produce the Hollywood Talent Show as a fundraiser for their trip to Hollywood. This news package highlights this year's successful show.

Judge 1

Positives: Your opening sound was good, the interviews engaging. You artfully included everyone. Nice narration.

Improvements: This piece tells no story, and there was an opportunity to do so. The opening duo seemed to have more to say about rehearsal, energy, nerves, etc. Let us know what it was like to be a part of the show, not just a list of who was there. Also, the one performer was Irish dancing not tap dancing.

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