PARCC Test News Package

Riverside Brookfield

News Package

Entry Description

A news package on PARCC Testing. Parts were cut to fit time constraints.

Judge 1

Positives: Great starting bite; it's short, but helps draw viewers into the story and subject matter. The reporter's on camera work is comfortable.

Improvements: If parts of the story have been removed to fit time constraints for the category then I can't fairly judge the entry. We need to have more of an explanation of the test, give us a sample question. We need more classroom sound to help move the piece along. I wanted to hear more from the students. The narration is much better when the reporter is on screen, the off camera tracking needs a bit more energy.

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