Vanessa: Brighten Someone's Day

York

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Entry Description

A day in the life of Vanessa, an inspirational woman who runs a smoothie stand at York High School.

Judge 1

Positives: - It was very feel good and everything you did in the story reflected that from the music, to the broll and the shooting and editing, very cohesive. - Great camera movements and use of an out of focus shot going back into focus, your shooting really told the story beautifully

Improvements: - Your sound could've been balanced a little better - The story was not super clear

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