Pencil Full of Lead

Franklin High School

Cinematography

Entry Description

The mood in this movie trailer is created through the cinematography. In every grandma's attic there exist secrets, these boys learn the hard way that some secrets should be left alone.

Judge 1

Positives: The storyline was very ambitious, and for the most part it was effectively done. The camera and editing showed a good understanding of cinematography.

Improvements: Acting wasn't bad but I never really bought the first line in the trailer "Hey man wanna check out my attic?". Felt like a spoof at times and didn't know whether to take it seriously or not.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice dramatic concept. Some of the shots were amazing and advances for HS. Well do on how the tempo and scenes matched...

Improvements: The first shot was beautiful the second shot (wide) seemed was unstable and the quality was not as high - this distracted me from the beginning. Again some of this was really well do for shots comps - the use of better or dramatic lighting would have helped a ton. Again, i am judging from a CIN position - well done.

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