I'm Alone

Franklin High School

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Hayden finds himself locked in the school over winter break.

Judge 1

Positives: Good sound mix. Well acted.

Improvements: Be careful shooting with bright light from windows and doors in the background. Be aware of the color balances as you change lighting sources.

Judge 2

Positives: Great use of lighting inside. I know that can be tricky. The comedy was subtle, which was good. Anyone can smirk and smile, but the acting seemed genuine in this one! This actore should get into improv comedy.

Improvements: The sound was a bit muffled at times. The actor, at times, seemed to be entertaining an audience and responding to their laughter. Try not to brake that fourth wall, unless it's integral to the narrative.

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