Divorce Through the Eyes of the Kid

York

News Package

Entry Description

Things that I learned about myself and the world around me throughout my experience as a kid with divorced parents.

Judge 1

Positives: The reporter's candid confessions are exemplary. She tells an emotional story with poise and grace.

Improvements: This is not a report, it's more of a personal essay. Using music throughout that has no connection to the piece is not a widely accepted technique in a newscast. Also there are images that are not clearly defined. What is the bedroom/apartment we are looking at?

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