Pretty Boy $wag - Soulja Boy (Parody)

Maine East

Music Video

Entry Description

One student's daydream turned music video. $wag.

Judge 1

Positives: Love the scene in the study hall or wherever when the rapper is dancing on the table and performing to everyone in the library while they are all deadpan ignoring him -- amazing concept. The thrift story location was amazing, it is always good to do some gorilla filmmaking and I respect that. The lighting at Dunkin Donuts was good! loved how you are at school disrupting study hall, it would be tight to have developed a story around this. The performance aimed directly at the camera worked well with the camera effectively capturing swag.

Improvements: The whole daydream could have been eliminated, just make it as a rap video. It would have been nice if you had featured represented some females in the video.

Judge 2

Positives: Nice use of affects and graphical element, which helped support the mood of the story.

Improvements: Without the effort behind your edits, this video would have been unwhelming. Match the creativity of the edits to the shoot, and you'll have a greatly imporoved video.

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