Torch

Morton West

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Nightmares, dreams, reality, what's the difference?

Judge 1

Positives: I like how abstract the beginning felt. I got pulled in right away. The bed was lit well (it's hard to light a room that's supposed to be dark, isn't it?), and the shot was interesting.

Improvements: The voiceover was hard to understand. And with directing, work with your actors to get the performance you need. If they're scared, I need to believe it. Rehearse, film, do it again, and again...

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