Mary Poppins Musical News Package

Maine East

News Package

Entry Description

A 2 minute news package detailing the upcoming Maine East High School musical production of Mary Poppins.

Judge 1

Positives: Excellent work overall! This makes me want to see the actual performance. The shot selections and pacing of edit capture the energy of the production. Excellent mix between b-roll and head shots.

Improvements: I have to really dig to find something to improve. But there is one thing. At the end of the piece when Lexie is closing the package frame the poster with the dates and time so the dates, location and times are more apparent. She verbally states that information. It is a good idea to show it visually as well.

Judge 2

Positives: Really fun beginning! love the music choice of music- it helps set the mood of the story! Great job with the broll and the interviews. I like how you set the interviews in cool places in the theater. great job telling people the info at the end! love the call to action

Improvements: Some of the audio was a little hollow, but great job overall! remember to white balance when you set up your shots!

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