Sympathy Kills

Maine South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A duo of gangsters enters a home to check out the latest and greatest drug-running equipment. One of them, however, has a secret, the identity of which unfolds through their climatic confrontation.

Judge 1

Positives: The pacing worked well. Good use of bandanas.

Improvements: Direct your actors. Start with rehearsals, see what works, what doesn't. Give your characters motivation. Make them real, not cliche versions of tougher people. Poor camera work, poor lighting, and poor sound can work as long as your actors are good and the story is compelling.

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