WHS PACKAGE XMAS CHILD

Wauconda Community High School

News Package

Entry Description

A segment from our Weekly Show of THE BARK on FBLA's visit to Operation Christmas Child

Judge 1

Positives: Very good b-roll footage. Showing the activity of the event added a lot to your project. It helps to give a sense of the scope of the event. The shot of the two girls at :50 is great. The framing feels just right. Even though it is a handheld shot there is very little camera shake.

Improvements: Consider using the rule of thirds in your shot compositions, especially during the interviews. The interview of Mrs. Mills would have been more effective had the camera been on a tripod. Try using an ambient audio track over the b-roll that are consistent with the room sounds during interviews.

Judge 2

Positives: Christmas music under the video was nice, video captured the fun of the event effectively

Improvements: audio was way too low, not a fan of this format, throw some video over the anchor intro OR incorporate that info into the PKG to make it an actual PKG, the banter at the end felt forced and unnatural

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