Bullying

Kelly

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA explores an ever growing social crime, bullying, and the effects it can have on a young person's life...

Judge 1

Positives: - Your sound was so well balanced, really taking this PSA to the next level. - Great use of editing and music to move the story along. Your edits were clean and cut directly to the beat of the music.

Improvements: - For how advanced everything was, I thought you could utilize a bit more camera movement to even further tell the story. - Being very picky but I would recommend slower transitions when the mood and music is so dark and slow.

Judge 2

Positives: - You showed the pain of bullying with few words - The black and white is a nice touch.

Improvements: - I found the shot of the girl on the bathroom floor with her eyes open to be too much. I think there's a way to soften that a little, while still maintaining the power and reality of your message. I think that same shot, but perhaps without showing the eyes, would be better. - I would like to see a reference to the problem of cyber bullying, as well.

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